Joan Miró, Painting (The bottle of wine), 1924
it was a lizard that exhaled the fumes, i was certain of it, and shrunk the eye of the morning like a melted rainbow —but someone had propped up the mouth—with the arms of a stilted bird or an inverted river made of frowns that poured out secrets like whispers from a fountain we are each prisms for the infinite, it cried, rockbottom bouquets of fairy dust and lightning the crystal skin that beats beneath the brow of every sun to which we kissed each other madly and pinched the wings from plastic butterflies our papered yellow dresses slipped off our shoulders and the grass stained our knees the dank shade of wine bottle blue that covers the cloth of every nightmare like a cool-fitted glove we were in the center of a three-pronged mystery the fanatical juxtaposition of a pitchfork and a pink cloud a time of no time, the death of the pendulum, fluorescent moth melted leather sun unsung ghost and all the earth was parallel to its swing we remembered who we were and the overripe haze of irreality —that prism pointing to its own reflection— escaped the wrath of the clouds uninjured and descended from the sky with the shimmer of a pink miracle or a forbidden seed papered in green (the spiritual meaning behind the color green is a subtle de-flowering of the streaming trees of our perception) and we curled ourselves like a bunch of cool ducks around a palm tree and waited for the perpendicular sign like a torch at the end of a bleeding arrow and all the sharks ate apples and the jellyfish swam with the doves and like the striped blue-green perfume of a swollen beehive the ocean fled skyward and spilled itself onto our backs and we carried it we carried it
4 responses to “Death of the Pendulum”
Swinging between spring blossoms,
and autumn on a lysergic string, this
poetic piece left my consciousness
collectively deflowered, and pollenated
. . . right down to the stamen 🌼💮🌸
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and may your newborn consciousness germinate
with maniacal precision
the seeds of the next surrealist juxtaposition:
a hammock and an iron butterfly
where you may unburden yourself
on the wings on your perception 😎👁🍃
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Hi! My name is David. I’m an 11-year-old boy who loves to read your poetry. I think your poems are awesome, but I think they should be shorter and funnier. Don’t get me wrong, your poems are engaging, but rhymes can help the musicality of the poem to help kids like me avoid getting lost in the plot. Think of what delighted or terrified you as a child–that’s the best place to start. Then, write and share with kids, who can’t get enough of good poems and stories like yours.
The series of Painters inspired poems, really knocks the ball out of the park for kid’s poetry awesomeness!
David 🙂
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Wow, David. It’s nice to have you here, and thank you for the thoughtful and exceptionally fluent feedback. 🙂
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