as walking in dreams i give the impression of someone seeking truth ancestors wildfires heroes on the run voices that are atoms from another life not always but sometimes, yes, a voyage of cruel contemplation red love ladies city boys & space-age whiskey silence is the universe in a bottle (& here they are as if made in miles) tongue-tied & alive & loosely seeking contact
Red Love Lady
The Used Life 
14 responses to “Red Love Lady”
Wonderful.
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Thank you very much!
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‘Silence is the universe in a bottle’
Wow. Beautiful.
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Thank you!
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blown away, as usual. I look to your work to help me learn what good poetry is
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Wow, thank you so much!
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Je suis d’accord avec naivehaircuts. C’est un poème fantastique, les mots se déplacent sensorielment avec une telle facilité et grâce. Il a un grand contrôle sur la voix et le ton et est si efficace pour transmettre son point. Tu es une poète fabuleux.
Joyeux samedi, L. Méfiez-vous de l’ange exterminateur!
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Merci beaucoup pour vos compliments, J. L’ange exterminateur?! Que voulez-vous dire? Un ange de mort? Le coronavirus? Je ne quitterai pas ma maison et si je vais à l’épicerie, je prendrai mon désinfectant pour les mains.
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Très bien. Parfait. Il est très important de se laver les mains après avoir écrit un poème, surtout si vous le faites dans la rivière qui vient d’être créée par votre merveilleuse fantaisie. 🙂
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You’re a goof. 😉 Thanks for making me laugh, J. I wish you a happy Saturday, as well!
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Merci. Je t’adore! 😉
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You write like contemporary poet loved it 🙂 silence is the universe in a bottle.. can you pls elaborate this phrase
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Thank you. I’m glad you enjoyed the poem. The line you pointed out, I think, can mean many different things at once (i.e., that the silence speaks to us, is imminent, the power of the universe taking shape), but it can also mean nothing at all. The kind of line that’s there to ignite the possibility of new meanings. Thanks for reading!
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Im a poetry person so read more of that.. for me its easy to read such blogposts too.. write more poems apart from usual posts thanks
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