(revised from an earlier version)
there are no answers; only instruments a butterfly, a tango, an empty glass a river, scandalous and electric summoning the voice of god under a wild oak tree every pleasure has a reason every body tears itself apart: to be sacred, and then die again as the best of rebels and women in love, cross-legged and getting lucky in the dark the geography of being, a disinterested sweater a prophecy of hands and mouth these syllables are short this violence, orgasmic it is only the taste that remains at twilight freely feeding June
17 responses to “Feeding June”
Is this your artwork?
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No, it isnโt. I got it from Depositphotos.
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Oh okay. I was curious and wanted to compliment your work (if it belonged to you). Itโs a nice piece nonetheless.
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Thank you. I love it, too. ๐
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This is so gorgeous! I need this framed, with one of your collage pieces. June is my birthday month. ๐
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Well, I’m sure that can be arranged. ๐ I am delighted you enjoyed the poem so much!
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Yes, I need to visit your shop! ๐ Thank you.
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If you would like a collage-poem combo, just let me know.
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I do and I will. ๐ Thank you!
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Love the artwork! And your poem is excellent..”a river, scandalous and electric summoning the voice of god
under a wild oak tree”..standing on the shore of a river is both stimulating as well as calming to me..this line definitely captures that feeling for me. Well done.
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Thank you so much, my friend. I love the artwork, too–it’s a favorite of mine from that artist. And I’m happy you enjoyed the poem. When I revised it, I replaced the phrase “my body” with “a river”. There didn’t seem to be much of a difference.
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How wonderful. And the first stanza is perfect!
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Thank you so much!
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Just lovely, friend.
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Thank you very much!
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Good composition. ๐ฌ๐ฆ
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Thank you!
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